Tuesday, July 22, 2008
What is the worst weather event that you’ve ever experienced?
Do animals have something to teach us? What is it?
Write about the things you do when you are procrastinating?
Friday, July 18, 2008
Describe a very, very hot day.
Describe living for a week without your cell phone
Write a letter as yourself to the child you were at age 10.
First of all you should get a translator to read this letter since you do not read, write nor speak English yet. In just a couple of year many great changes will come to your life, some are good and some are bad. I think the best thing you can do at this moment in your life is enjoy your last couple years of your child hood. Don worry about growing up and learning how to drive or getting a job so that you can earn money. You should enjoy this carefree life you have at the moment and just have fun. However, keep studying hard and if you can study even harder. Every time you have an opportunity to learn something new go for it, you never know when it might come in handy. Enjoy the beautiful city you live in. Take a time to relax and appreciate the suppleness of the life in Ciudad Barrios. You should also try to visit your grandparents, aunts and uncles more often. If you can maybe try and learn some English, at least some basic vocabulary. If you can take hiking trip to the mountains and just enjoy the beautiful landscape of San Miguel. You live in a beautiful place full with pleasant people. Enjoy every minute you have in lovely Ciudad Barrios.
Monday, July 7, 2008
Describe the most embarrassing thing that ever happened to you.
What do you do when you get home from work?
Respond to the quote: “Memory is our favorite form of time travel.”
I think memories bring back unique experiences with in a person’s past. This is the reason why many people at one time or another will think about their past. This is the reason why memory is not only our favorite form of time travel but our only one. It is one thing to see an event of the past, but a different thing to actually relieve it. I think memory is the only way we can relieve our past experiences.
Remember the first time that you ever went to the library. Describe your impressions of the experience. (Freewrite, 10 minutes.)
list of metaphors that relate to the computer interface
Scrolling
Window
Keyboard
Close Window
Open Window
Pointer
Zoom in
Zoom out
Mouse Click
Input
Output
Delete
Undo
Repeat
Cut
Paste
Computer have with out a doubt have made an impact on our writing. The most obvious effect of this impact is that know writing is a lot easier for everyone. A few decades ago it might have been hard for someone who had poor hand writing to develop good written communication skills. Having legible handwriting is still very important, even today. However the computer has made it easier for many more people to develop better written communication skills.
The computer has also impacted the way we think. The computer helps in organizing our though better. For example when some one is writing a research paper, they could easily have all the information in their computer rather than in a table full of books. In a way the computer has made it easier for us to think since we do no longer have to worry too much on gathering information.
Wednesday, July 2, 2008
Free Write
Free Write
Friday, June 27, 2008
FREEWRITE (10 mins) Think of a time when you had to teach something to someone (academic subject, hobby, on the job, etc.). What were your objectives?
The Future
Time
World Cup
The Early Identification Program, EIP
School and Work
annotations, 3 sources
New York, United States: Marine Technology and SNAME News
This article reports of a new initiative at Maine Maritime Academy to develop a test facility for new tidal power technologies. Overall this article gives important information about the current interest in tidal technology. This article will be an extremely useful source to show that the interest in developing and testing tidal technologies is growing.
Anonymous, May 1999 Catch a Wave
United States: "Today’s Science on File"
This article gives detail on the power that resides within the ocean tides and currents. It also gives details on the types of technologies that have been develop or are in the process of being developed to harness the power of the ocean. The information in this article is very insightful. However there are other sources that have more details and that are more current.
Anonymous, December 2004 "Tidal Turbines: A new Spin on Power Production"
United States: Today's Science On File
This article is about the future installation of tidal turbines in New York’s East River. The article goes into some detail in terms on how much power the turbines will provide the city of New York. This article has good information but since it is a bit outdated it is not a reliable source. According to some other sources, the turbines that this article talks about have already been active for a couple of years.
Thursday, June 26, 2008
annotations, 4 sources
Jeff L Brown, 2001 "Tidal Turbines to capture ocean’s energy"
New York, New York United States: Civil Engineering
This article is about the tidal turbines and harnessing the power of tides and currents. It speculates on the ability to install the tidal turbines on bridges where tidal currents are very strong. Overall this source is very short and to the point. It gives a brand new perspective in terms of the installation of tidal turbines.
Anonymous, 2001 "Tidal shift"
Washington United States: Environment
This article gives very critical information about tidal turbines. It states how tidal turbine technology is better at harnessing tidal power than previous tidal technologies. This article seems like a very insightful source. It provides detail on how much power a farm of tidal turbines can produce. It also suggests other uses for tidal turbines besides just generating electricity.
Anonymous, 2002 "British Government funds tidal power"
United Kingdom: Appropriate technology
This brief article informs about how the British Government has funded the research of tidal power technologies. This article is a very good source because it tells how the British Government is willing to invest on the research for alternative, renewable sources of energy.
L S Blunden and A S Bahaj, 2007 "Tidal Energy resource assessment for tidal stream generators"
Southampton, United Kingdom: IMeachE This article is an assessment of the resources available for tidal stream generators. It goes into details about the different requirements needed for tidal technology to work efficiently. Unlike the other sources this source goes very deep in terms of what is needed for tidal technologies to work effectively. This gives a new perspective and shows that a tidal power requires a lot of planning.
annotations, 3 sources
Chicago Illinois, United States: Bulletins of the Atomic Scientist
This article reports a brief over view on tidal power and how it can be used as alternative sources of energy. This article gives good general information on how much power tidal turbines can generate. It also tells on how tidal turbines have little effect on the environment.
Anonymous, July 20, 2007 Turbine seeks to turn tide
United Kingdom: The Engineer
This article tells about a new design for a tidal turbine in the United Kingdom. It also tells that because of the lack of support from the government for this new design, the developers might seek support from other countries like the United States. This source provides good information in terms the development of tidal technologies. It also shows one of the challenges of this new technology which is the lack of support from the government.
R.F. Nicholls-Lee and S.R. Turnock, 2008 Tidal energy extradition: Renewable, sustainable and predictable
Northampton, United Kingdom: Science Progress
This article gives a lot of detail about tidal power. It describes in detail the science behind tides. It also list site around the world that where tidal power can be harness efficiently. Overall this article is an extremely useful source since it contains a lot of information about tidal power.
Annotations of 5 sources
United Kingdom: The Engineer
Report on how tidal turbines could be installed in the Bristol Channel and provide electricity the United Kingdom with in two years. This source is helpful because it shows how tidal turbine could be used in actual practice. It also goes into some details on the design of the tidal turbines.
Anonymous, Mar 19, 2008 Tidal Turbines should soon supply the grid
United Kingdom: The Engineer
Report on the installation of the first commercial grid-connected tidal turbine. This source show how obtaining energy forms the tides is actually becoming a reality. It also tells of the difficulties that come when installing the turbines because of shortages in supplies or bad weather.
Cammy Clark, Nov 12, 2007 Keys man's dream: Harnessing the tides
Miami Florida, United States: Miami Herald
This article reports of a pioneering project in Florida to harness the power from the tides. This source is very informative because it gives some details on what the United States is doing/not doing to harness tidal power. It also goes into some detail in terms of coast and possible power output from tidal turbine farms.
Peter L Frankel, 2006 Tidal Current Energy Technologies
Bristol, United Kingdom: Marine Current Turbine Limited
This paper goes into detail about current tidal technologies. It gives a brief history, strengths and weakness, and environmental of tidal technologies. This source provides insightful information about current tidal technologies.
Anthony T. Jones & Adam Westwood, 2005 Power from the oceans
Maryland, United States: The Futurist
This article gives a general report on alternative sources of energy from the ocean which includes tidal power. The article gives a lot of useful information but some of it does not relate to my topic. Nevertheless the information in this article about my topic is useful since it talks about some of the challenges of tidal technologies.
Friday, June 20, 2008
Research Topic
Types of Writing in Electrical Engineering
A more formal type of writing is also found with in Electrical Engineering. Many times Electrical have to write reports to supervisors or clients that are not familiar with the technical aspects of engineering. This reports or documents have to be well written with explanation of technical terns when ever necessary.
Being able to effectively communicate through writing is a trait that all engineers have to develop in order ton work more efficiently.
Thursday, June 19, 2008
Visual Porfolio
Victor Manuel Mendez
Eng 302-BN6 (Natural Science) Online Course
Professor Mel Nichols
Visual Project
Introduction
My current career goals are to gain experience through internships before I graduate and after graduation find a gratifying job that will enhance my knowledge. After I graduate I would like to either work for the government or in the private sector. I would also like my future job to be related to the development and testing of new technology. I also plan to seek my master’s degree after getting my bachelors. I want to start working towards my masters as soon as I graduate. I am hoping that my future job will help me pay the tuition cost of the master’s degree.
Here is some back ground information on me. I am 21 years old and I am from
Briefing on the kind of visual information used in Electrical Engineering
Purpose: The purpose of this briefing is to give a general overview of the types visual representation of information used in Electrical Engineering
Background: Electrical Engineers are at the front line of innovation in technology. Electrical Engineers usually work in teams with people having background in other fields of engineering and people with no background on engineering. Good communication is vital in these teams for the completion of projects and overall goals. The most common types of visual representation of information used in Electrical Engineering are circuit diagrams, structural diagrams, graphs and videos.
· Circuit Diagrams: Circuit diagrams are used mainly on lab reports. These give the reader a better idea of how the circuit works and how parts are connected together. Complicated circuits are studied more effectively by separating them into different parts and displaying them as separate diagrams. Circuit diagrams usually appear at the beginning of a presentation/lab report to serve as a guide.
· Structural Diagrams: In my current internship I have come across structural diagrams. The diagrams are used to show and simplify the connection between two systems. For example, a structural diagram will show how a satellite communicates with a ground station. Structural diagrams can come at the beginning, middle or end of a presentation. These diagrams also help the reader/audience understand how the two systems work together.
· Graphs: Many times I have preformed a lab and taken tons of data for a circuit. To show the characteristics of the circuit, the data is plotted in a graph to display any relationships. For example, a graph can help demonstrate a linear relationship between current and voltage. Graphs can be found anywhere with in a presentation where there is a table with data that needs to be interpreted or analyzed.
· Videos: Videos are a very useful visual representation of information in Electrical Engineering. Videos are used to show how to set up experiments, to show how a particular device works and to show the completion of a particular project. Videos are highly preferred in presentation because the technical aspects of what is being presented become easy to understand. Usually a video will be shown at the end of the presentation, as a tool to pull the entire presentation together.
Current Status: In project presentations in Electrical Engineering, like a senior design project, most of the above aids will be used. Electrical Engineers work on complex projects that have distinct parts such circuitry, building component, data fathering and data analysis. The preferred presentation for such projects is power point presentations where all the visual aids can be incorporated with ease.
Conclusion: In Electrical Engineers, the most common types of visual representation of information are circuit diagrams, structural diagrams, graphs and videos. Electrical Engineers work in teams which can include people with backgrounds on other engineering fields and people with no background on engineering. Good communication within the team is vital for project completion. Visual representations of information provide a good aid to enhance a presentation with in a team of engineers and non-engineers.
Briefing on some current topics in Electrical Engineering
Purpose: The purpose of this briefing is to give a general overview of some current topics in Electrical Engineering
Background: To day Electrical Engineer have the opportunity to work on various different types of innovative projects. As the world advances into an age where technological advancements make our lives easier, Electrical Engineers put their innovative minds to work. Some current topics in Electrical Engineering are energy, communication systems and embedded computers.
· Energy: One of the most imperative issues in Electrical engineering and the world is energy. Without energy the world would plunges into a new Dark Age. The supply of non-renewable sources of energy will soon start to deplete. It is of most importance for new renewable sources of energy to be developed. Already there are many alternatives sources of energy that are being consider. However many of these sources do not provide the sufficient energy to meet the demands. Electrical Engineers along with other engineers and scientist need to work to improve current alternative sources of energy and come up with new ones.
· Communication Systems: Today the world demands faster flow of information. Every day teams of electrical engineers work to upgrade and come up with better communication systems. There are always satellites and ground networks that need to be upgrades in order to ensure efficient and faster communication. Communication systems can be found in areas such news, weather forecast, wireless phone networks and global positioning systems.
· Embedded Computers: Looking at the world today, computers are found everywhere. Essentially every electronic device as a small computer embedded inside. It is of great importance that these embedded computers and computers in general become more efficient. Examples where computers play a major part are cars, airplanes, televisions, cell pones and hand held music players.
Current Status: Electrical Engineers play an important role in our present society. Electrical Engineers can be found working in power plants, satellite systems, electronics design, and many other areas.
Conclusion: Thanks to the effort of Electrical Engineers technology keeps advancing making our lives easier. Electrical Engineers work in many areas that have a direct impact on us. Some current issues in Electrical Engineering are energy, communication systems and embedded computers. Next time there is a new the technological advancement such as a new cell phone or a faster computer, it is guaranteed that Electrical Engineers play an important part in the development of the new technology.
Proposal: Learning about the Global Positioning System, GPS
The Global Positioning System also known as GPS has come to play an important role in our daily lives. Every time some one uses an application such as google maps, mapquest or navigation systems device, they are essentially using the GPS. It is important that everyone who uses GPS directly or indirectly knows how the GPS works. Just like learning the basics on how to use a computer is essential to everyone, people should also have a general idea about other innovative technologies such as the GPS.
Having knowledge of Global Positioning System is important to anyone who travels constantly, anyone who owns a navigation systems or a smart-phone with Global Positioning System features. In today world almost everyone has come across the navigation system device. But how does it work? Is it a magic box or is there more to it? The audience for this visual project is anyone who owns devices that use the GPS but also anyone seeking to expand their knowledge on technology in general.
The best way to show how the GPS works is to show the diagrams of the different parts that compose it. The first diagram will show the type of satellite that makes up the GPS network. The second diagram will show GPS satellite network with satellites and their respective orbits. Another diagram can help explain how the network is divided into different sectors and how the satellites in each sector work together to male the GPS more efficient. The final diagrams will show the ground stations or devices that received the information form the GPS satellites.
The diagrams can either be presented using full poster boards or a power point presentation. The power point presentation will be the most likable choice to be used in this presentation. It does not take long to come up with a power point presentation and the diagrams can expanded to whatever necessary size to show any important details. To best show the details of the GPS in the diagrams, it would be best to use pictures from the National Aeronautics and Space Administration, NASA. Many resources can be found at the NASA website, and other websites dedicated to space technologies, that can help with describing the GPS system.
To show how the GPS satellite network works with diagrams will ensure the audience gets a clear picture in their minds. Most people do know not how map-quest or google maps get aerial pictures and detail maps of the places where they want to travel. The diagrams will make the complex GPS network more understandable and simple. People will be able to understand what happens at the other end of a navigation system. Overall the audience will learn to appreciate the technology that makes up the Global positioning System.
Use the following link to view Visual Project
http://www.slideshare.net/MrMendez007/victor-mendez-visual-project-group-2/
4013 Lassen Ct
Alexandria, VA 22312
June 17, 2008
George Mason University
Eng 302 Online Course
Dear English 302 Classmates,
Today the world is filled with exiting innovative technology. Thanks to innovative technologies our lives become easier and free of hassle. It is important how ever that the technology should not be taken for granted. We should make an effort to have a basic understanding how technology works I have created a visual representation of information to help you understand how the Global Positioning System, GPS works. The GPS is a network of satellites that was created with military purposes but that has come to have a great impact on the lives of ordinary people. Thanks to the GPS you no longer have to buy large, confusing maps when you go on a road trip. All you need is your navigation system that uses the GPS network to lead you towards your desired destination. If you are interested in learning basic information about the GPS feel free to take a look at my visual presentation
Sincerely,
Victor Mendez
Section for Questions and Comments:
Friday, June 13, 2008
Proposal: Gobal Positioning System Satellite Network
A. Statement of Problem and Target Audience (1 paragraph)
Today I will talk about the Global Positioning System also know as GPS. It is important that we know how the Global Positioning System work because it has become a vital part of our lives. The Global Positioning System has made innovations like google maps, map-quest and navigation systems possible.
B. Detailed Description of the Target Audience (1 paragraph)
Having knowledge of Global Positioning System is important to anyone who travels constantly or anyone who owns a navigation systems or a smart-phone with Global Positioning System features.
C. Proposed Visual Project with Application and Purpose/Usefulness for Target Audience (1 paragraph)
The best way to show the system works to show the diagrams of the different parts that compose it. First, the diagram of the type of satellite that makes up the Global Position System Network. Second, a diagram of the full Global Positioning System satellite network, that show how many satellites are used and the orbits of the satellites. This diagram can help explain how the network is divided into different sectors the role that the orbits of the satellites play to make the network efficient.
D. Plan of Activities--This should include how the visual will be distributed, used, encountered, marketed, etc. (1 paragraph)
The diagrams can either be presented using full poster boards or a power point presentation. The power point presentation will be the most likeable choice to be used in this presentation. It does not take long to come up with a power point presentation and the diagrams can expanded to whatever necessary size to show any important details.
E. Evaluation (how will you assess the impact of your project if you were to implement it--1 short paragraph)
To show how the Global Positioning System satellite network works with diagrams will ensure the audience gets a clear picture in their minds. Most people do know not how map-quest or google maps get aerial pictures and detail maps of the places where they want to travel. The diagrams will make the complex Global Positioning System network more understandable and simple. People will be able to understand what happens at the other end of a navigation system. Overall the audience will appreciate the technology that makes up the Global positioning System.
briefing on the kind of visual information used your field
Circuit Diagrams: Circuit diagrams are used mainly on the labs reports. The diagrams give the reader a better idea of how the circuit works and how parts are connected together. Complicated Circuits can be study more effectively by separating in to different parts and displaying the parts as separate diagrams. Circuit diagrams are usually used at the beginning of a presentation/lab report to serve as a guide to the reader.
Structural Diagrams: In the internship where I am working I have come across structural diagrams. The diagrams are use to show and simplify the connection between two systems. For example a structural diagram will show how a satellite will communicate and relay information to a ground station and how the station processes the information. Structural Diagrams can either come at the beginning, the middle or at the presentation. These structural diagrams can also help the reader/audience understand how the two systems work together.
Graphs: Many times I have preformed a lab and taken tons of data for a circuit. To show the characteristics of the circuit the data is plotted in a graph to display any relationships. For example a graph can be help in showing a linear relationship between current and voltage. Graphs will usually come after tables full of data to be interpret the data in the table.
Videos: Videos are a very useful visual representation of information in electrical engineering. Videos are used to show demonstrations how set up an experiment, to show how a particular device works and to show the completion of a particular project. Videos are highly preferred in presentation because the technical aspects of what is being presented can be made easy to understand. Usually a video will be show at the end of the presentation, as a tool to pull the entire presentation together into a final result.
Visual representations of information related to Electrical Engineering
The following are the most common types of visual representation of information used in electrical engineering.
Circuit Diagrams, Structural Diagrams, Graphs and Videos
Survey of Current Topics in Your Field
1)alternative sources: Solar Energy/Solar Panels, Underwater Turbines
http://www.nytimes.com/2007/06/12/nyregion/12mayor.html?_r=1&scp=2&sq=Underwater+Turbines&st=nyt&oref=slogin
http://query.nytimes.com/gst/fullpage.html?res=9C0CEFDE103BF933A25754C0A9629C8B63&scp=1&sq=Underwater+Turbines&st=nyt
2) World Fastest Computer:
http://abcnews.go.com/Technology/wireStory?id=5028546
3) Electric Cars
http://abcnews.go.com/Business/story?id=4991666&page=1
http://www.kentucky.com/101/story/428302.html
http://www.aptera.com/
Wednesday, June 11, 2008
briefing
To day Electrical Engineer have many opportunities to work on various different types of projects. As the world advances into an age where technological advancements make our lives easier, Electrical Engineers put their innovative minds to work. One of the most imperative issues in the world today is energy. With out energy the world plunges into anew Dark Age. With non-renewable sources of energy become scares everyday, it is of most importance for new, renewable sources of energy to be developed. Already there are many alternatives sources of energy that are being consider. How ever many of these sources do not provide the sufficient energy to meet the demands. Electrical Engineers along with other engineers and scientist need to work to improve current alternative sources of energy or come up with new ones.
Electrical Engineers also work in areas as communication system and computer design. Today the world demands faster communications was well as reliable computers. Every day teams of electrical engineers work hard to come up with better communication systems. There are always satellites and ground networks that need to be upgrades in order to ensure efficient and fast communication.
Looking at the world today, computers are found everywhere. Essentially every electronic device as a small computer embedded inside. It is of great importance that these embedded computers and computers in general become more efficient. Examples where computers play a major part are cars, airplanes, televisions, cell pones and entertainment devices such as iPods. Anywhere where a technological advancement is made, electrical engineers are working behind the scenes.
Writing Goals and Aspirations (freewrite, 10 minutes)
I know that I am not that great of a writer and I hope that this class will help me improve. Learning English as a second language was hard and even though I consider myself fluent in English and Spanish, there is s till a lot for me to learn. I want to be able to write papers more efficiently. Many times when I have to write a paper I feel like I am forced to do something I don’t want to. I want to be able to write a paper and enjoy the experience. As an engineer student I have to write lots of lab reports. I am hoping that English 302 will help me develop appropriate skills to write technical papers such as lab reports. Interms of my future career goals I want to be eable to communicate efficiently and professionally. I don’t want to be the guy who has a degree but he does not know how to write a simple report or worst yet a proper email. I know for a facts that most employers always seek individuals with good writing and verbal communication skills. Hopefully English 302 will help polish my skills to a decent level of writing competency. Personally I jjust want to be a better writer overall. English has always been the class I struggle with more. I don’t want to struggle with writing papers anymore.
Tuesday, June 10, 2008
Summary of Peer Feedback on Memoir (150-250 words)
Monday, June 9, 2008
What Are You Passionate About?
Sunday, June 8, 2008
Observation and Description Exercise
It was Sunday afternoon, when I finally decided to begin working on observation and description exercise. It was a bit hard to come up for a good place to do this assignment. At first I was going to do it in a car near my house, however the day was so hot and I did not want to spend one hour in the heat. I since I had to come to a meeting at the Fairfax Campus of George Mason, I decided to do my exercise in the Science and technology building 2. I choose the Peer Advising room in the second floor.
Usually the peer advising room is a very busy place, but in the summer and especially on a Sunday afternoon the hold building is like a ghost town. I came into the room and as I expected it was empty. I sat down next to one of the tables, got myself very comfortable and began observing. Tick, tock, tick, tock the sound of the clock hand ticking was the most obvious. I thought to myself, hearing the clock think is going to males this hour very long. I also picked up another very obvious sound, the humming of the air conditioning. I began to think that I made a mistake and picked the wrong place. Sooner or later I thought I would be sleeping.
I try it focus my mind and just observe my surrounding. The room was very bright and besides the humming and the ticks of the clock everything was very quiet. This is a very different scene from the weekdays during the regular semester. Usually the most common noises are the tying of the key boards, people chatting, music playing and cell phones ringing.
A few minutes into my hour of observation I hear a couple of extra noises. One sounded like the air condition but it was much louder and the other one was a clamping noise. Soon I realized that it was the water fountain out in the hall way. After the noise from the water fountain stopped it was back to the clock and the air conditioning. But then there was something else. I could hear the dangling of keys. I soon was also able to hear someone walking in the hall. I guess the building was not empty after all. I also caught the sound of doors opening every now and then. I could hear the sound of the elevator stopping and opening. I thought that sooner or later someone and ask me what I was doing.
I was a bit amazed at the fact that I could listen to the movements outside the room and even hear doors opening in the far side of the hall way. I soon realized that I my hour was over. In the mist o focusing on the other sounds I had completely ignored the ticks of the clock.
Friday, June 6, 2008
Autobiography of a Writer
I believe that I am a very poor writer. As it might be obvious from my blogs post, my writing is full of grammar mistakes, spelling errors and just not really creative in general. There are many reasons that have led me to become a poor writer. First of all English is my second language. Secondly, I never really liked writing too much though I know is necessary so I give it my best so that it is not horrible either. Finally my handwriting is really bad and I type very slowly, both of these discourage me from writing to often except when necessary.
Spanish is my first language and there a few differences in terms of the grammar structure between the two. I know Spanish very well in terns of speaking it but my grammar is not great either. I came to the United States when I was eleven. I was just beginning to learn to write with more complexity in Spanish when I stared to learn how to write and speak in English. I think this greatly affected my writing abilities both in English and Spanish.
That fact that I don’t enjoy writing very much, I think is a direct side effect of my typing and handwriting abilities. No matter how hard I have tried my handwriting does not seem to improve. I just hate when I look at the messy notes I have created after and important lecture. Secondly my typing skills are not too bad but not grade either. I tend to mostly use my right hand when typing and I mostly use only four fingers instead of using all ten. I am hoping to somehow improve both my typing and hand writing skills.
I am well aware of the importance of being an able writer. I am soon to be a professional and I really to not want to go into the real world being a poor writer. I am hoping than English 302 takes me a step closer to becoming a better writer.
Choose one event or person from day before and expand it (freewrite, 10 minutes)
MS Hortensia Cadenas has defently impacted my life but also the life of hundreds of other people who have come through the Early Identification program as students. The program started in 1987 how ever she has been the director of the program since 1989 or 1990, I can’t really recall correctly. Ms Cadenas came from Cuba some time in her youth and when she came to the United States one of the first goals she set for her self was to get a better education. She did get a degree from George Mason Unversity, again I can no recall the details. Since she became the director of EIP she has worked extremely hard so that every student that goes through EIP learns the importance of education beyond college. She has helped me and countless other by recommending us for scholarships. She is always meeting with people to try and get fundings to make EIP even better. The best thing about her is that she is never to busy to come and talk to you. When ever I see her she will greet me with the biggest smile and big hug. She is always interested in how I am doing at school. When I first started college she make sure I did not take to o many hard classes. Like I said before she is like a second mother to me. She is always willing to listen and help in anyway she can. Recently she got and award from George Mason, I think for being the best director of a program. She truly has done wonders with EIP and with the students. She is the kind of person who is very passionate about her job and just loves helping people.
Recent Dream (freewrite, 10 minutes)
Ok, for some reason when I was younger I remember that I use to have a lot of dreams and I was able to recall them without difficulty. However, as I have grown older I ten to have less and less dreams. I also don’t seem to be able to recall my dreams exactly. So let me write about a dream I remember very well from when I was around 12 or 13 years old. In my dream I was sitting down in my living room watching tv. It seem like it was a summer night and by the looks of it was around 10 or 11 at night. I remember going outside to a pitch black, star-less night. I tried to look for the moon, but it was not there. As I looked around I noticed that the street lights were very dim. Soon I was filled with a fear like no other. I could also feel the adrenaline rushing through my body. I looked up and out of the blackness from the sky came and extremely bright ball of light. This ball of light was very white and my first thought was that it was a comet. I saw it run across the balck sky and I noticed it crashed landed somewhere in the horizon. I was sitting in front of my house when I saw it hit. Soon there was something like an explosion. However out of the explosion came this white light that started spreading everywhere. It was comeing towards me making the black night bright as day. After that I woke up in my bed and it was time to go to school.
What did you see on your way here? (freewrite, 10 minutes)
On my way here I came through the hall inside my house, pass the bathrrom into my room. Before that I was in the living room eating some popcorn with my mother. There was the Spanish news channel and my dad was sitting down in the sofa infront of us. Before that I was talking a nap in my room after a long day at work. Coming from work takes me about an hour because of traffic. I worked all the way in herdon and even though it is a very highpaying job I hate the fact that I have to drive so much, especially with the high gas prices. On my way here I take the sortest way in terms of distance trhough some back roads. On my way home I passed a lot of traffics light more than 20 I think. It was very hot and I try to use the air conditioner in my car again beasue of the high gas prices. Well it seem that today there were more cars on the road than usual. I passed trhough Fairfax and to my right was a subway. I felt like stoping somewhere and just go out and buy a soda or ice cream since it was so hot. It was a very bright afternoon unlike the past couple of days when it was raining. When I got home I paked the car and I noticed that the grass is a bit hig. I noticed the red flower my mom planted, don’t remember their name but they look very nice. I also looked at some trees my parents planted a few years ago and they seem to have grown a lot since then.
Wednesday, June 4, 2008
#4 Three Significant Events (freewrite, 10 minutes)
Three significqant events in my life have been, coming to the united states, joing the early identification program, EIP and starting college. I came to the united states when I was eleven years old. Like many I came to the country illegally trhough the US and Mexico border. However since my mother had asylum I was able to gain legal status and just acouple of years ago I became a US citizen. Coming to the US at an early age open the door for me to get a better education. Joinging the EIP prohram helped me underatnd what I needed to know to getting into college. One of the first draw backs that first generation college bound students face is that they do not know how the system works. EIP helped me learn all that I needed to know to apply for colleges and scholarships. Bceasue of EIP I took advanced courses in high school. It was on my advanced physics class where I first comtemplated becoming an electrical engineer. I remember that we started learning about electricity. I though the topic was very cool and interesting. I asked my professor what did was studying before he became a teacher and he said was was trying to become an electrical engineer. Starting college was also very important event for me. This was the culmination of all my hard work in high school. I am the fisrt of my family to attend college and I am really proud of that. I want to be the first to not only graduate but to also go beyond to get a masters degree and possible a Phd.
#3 Three Significant People (freewrite, 10 minutes)
Three significant people in my life? I would have to choose my older brother Jose, Mrs Cadenas, and my mother.
My brother has always been a very hard working individual. Since he was in high school he always tried to the best and work dilegintly. While he was in high school he also had a full time job, and he still manages to get A’s and B’s. After he graduated he started to work as and Air condition and heat technitian. He was always coming home all tired and messy. He would let his hair and bear grow out of control cause he was always to busy working to get a haircut or shave. He eventually made his own company as an AC and Heat technitian. His determination was what inspired me to got to collge and become and professional.
Mrs. Cadenas is like a second mother to me. She is the director of the Early Identification Program design to help first generation college bound students make it to collge. She cares deeply about me and the other EIP students. She always has this caring and motherly presence. She is really sweet and always tries to help me and others.
My mother is one of the most determined persons I know. Though I did not grow up with her she has given me a lot of love. I not only love her but I deeply respect her for her hard work. Even though she only whenm to second grade she has achived a lot in her life. Because of her my brothers and I got a better life than she did. When she was diagnosed with canser in 2001 she did not allow this to stop here. The canser is gone and she still working hard for her family.
#2 Earliest Memory (freewrite, 10 minutes)
Well my earliest memory I think is just a flash back of my sisters birthday party. I don’t remember how old she was turning, I just remember being there with all my brother, cousins and friends. I remember that I was looking at my sister’s birthday cake and I poked it with my finger. My aunt, who was taking care of me and my brother at that time, got really mad at me and sent me to a room. I remember I was really mad and I don’t recall getting out of the room, possible I felt a sleep. My guess is that I was around three years old when this happened. Another memoery was when we moved to a house closer to the city. I am from El Salvador and at first we used to live in a very rural area. When I was around four years old we moved to a house near the city. I remember when I entered the house that I could hear the eacho since it was empty. It also had some windows. I remember I said to myself, “hey this is like the hospital.” In the town/city where I lived the hospital was very big so in someparts it had some echo. Also the windows in the new house where the same kind as the one from the hospital. I guess at the time I came to the house I had some memory about going to the hospital.
One final memoery was when I went with one of my aunts to get a shot at the hospital. I remember that when I saw the doctor with the neddle I started crying and fighting back cause I did not want to get the shot. They eventually gave me the shot and I remember in the way to the house I was limping cause my leg was hurting really bad because of the shot.
#1 Current Major and Career Goals (freewrite, 10 minutes)
My current career goasl are to to go into my final year and graduate. Soon after that I plan to seek employement with and engineering company or maybe go work for the federal government. These are my goals because I guess that is what I want to fo after college. I want to become a professional and the first person in my family to attend and graduate from college. I am working as hard as I can to achive my goals, taking summer classes to keep up with the requirements for graduation. My current major is electrical engineering and I was thinking of maybe minoring in mathematics. If I do choose to get a minor in mathematics my graduation will be pushed a semmeter until fall 2009 instead of spring 2009. That is the current debate I am having, to go for the math minor or stick to just getting my major. In five years I see myself with a masters degree, with a high paying job. In 10 years I hope to be married with a kid or two and possibly working on my Phd. In 15 years I hope that I could start my own business or just have a very high paying job that support my family and I. I just hope to live a confortable life and help people out whenever I can.