Summary of Peer Feedback on Memoir (150-250 words)

The peer feedback for my memoir was very help in showing me where I made the greatest mistakes. I am not that greater of a writer and people always catch stuff I do not see even after I read through my papers. I think all the feedback was very useful and I do not think there is anything I would like to ignore. I specially like the feedback on how in I could use information form the second paragraph and incorporate it in my introduction. I also will try to use one story and describe it in detail and just mentioned the others as support of the main one. I also like the fact that one of my peers told me that the flow of my sentence is good at times. I will try to revise my paper so that the flow of my sentences is smoother. Another important mistake that my peers pointed out was the transition between paragraphs. I usually after I write and revise a paper I tend to always overlook my transition. I will take a closer look to see how I could improve my transitions between paragraphs. Overall all, the feedback was very useful and I’ll try to use as much of it as I can to improve my memoir.